You always see players shake hands after trying to break each other for 60 minutes which leads me to wondering if there’s any players who down right hate each other and have gone on record to say so.
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It flows better with “personal foul” instead of “unsportsmanlike conduct.”
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Disagree. The multi-syllable first word in the third line leading to Ndamukong on the fourth turns the piece into two non-rhyming couplets by establishing two different meters. If you use “Personal Foul” the fourth line betrays the rhythm and it sounds like you fucked up the ending.
