I dunno, I don’t think it works.
Which seems dumb to say when nobody knows what you were going for except you, but it just lacks cohesion. There’s no sense of life to the image, despite there being a lot in the image that should make it space alive, if that makes sense?
You know how it is though, everyone has their own perspective with imagery. It’s exceedingly difficult to frame any image in a way that translates what the intent is to even a big section of possible viewers, so I could just be missing the connection