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Some quick feedback:

The two things that draw my attention are the person looking away and the black blob in the top right. The black blob mostly feels like a distraction. The person is not well lit and almost hard to see compared with the almost over exposed foreground. There’s a lot of interesting stuff in the picture but kinda mixed messages for what to focus on with the parts in focus being so dim.

I would try cropping much tighter around the subject and see if you can find a stronger composition.

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