Yeah, I think there are a few adjustments I should make. Thanks for pointing that out. How’s this?

Yeah, I can see what you mean. Thanks for the advice! How’s this? Any other tips?

Thank you!

What do you think about this? I know I won’t get it to be perfect but your tips are helping.

Thanks! And thanks for all your advice too!

Thank you so much!

I suppose the other one did have it’s own charm too. Thanks so much!

Yay! Thank you!