I joined Beehaw specifically hoping to get in on the ground floor of the growing writing community here, but I have to admit I havenā€™t had much to say.

So, for the other folks checking this community once a day or so to see whatā€™s being posted, ā€œHi!ā€

Iā€™m enthusiastically nearing the end of the first draft of my first novel, and pretty excited to jump into revisions once thatā€™s done.

I aspire to be traditionally published, though Iā€™ve heard how unlikely that is for a first novel over and over, so Iā€™m (primarily) viewing this first novel as a learning experience, and itā€™s very much been one of those.

Iā€™m interested to hear where others are at.

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A sci-fi/fantasy blend is less complicated than it seems, if it is something you want to give a try in future. Mine basically started out very Star Wars-esque, before it took on a life of its own and I played up the magical elements more. I find that I donā€™t enjoy world-building for its own sake, so I tend to incorporate it into a story as I write. The results end up pretty fluid, but disorganised, which is interesting.

What kind of thing do you write?

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Iā€™m writing what I think of as ā€œclassic fantasyā€ - though whether others would find that term applicable I do not know.

No dragons, no Tolkien-esque races, but a typical Europe-ish setting, say 18th-ish century without gunpowder, and a fairly hard magic system which is both powerful and self-limiting, with a story of pursuing justice while being pursued by those who would deny it. The theme has ended up being very heavy on friendship and loyalty. Itā€™s not a cozy, but itā€™s very much not grimdark, either.

Iā€™m a little bit worried that I donā€™t provide enough possibility of death to any of the main characters via the story as written, but Iā€™m so close to the end that Iā€™m not going to change anything unless I still feel this way during revision.

I find that I donā€™t enjoy world-building for its own sake, so I tend to incorporate it into a story as I write.

I do this as well, but I take somewhat copious notes regarding the significant details as I create them. Itā€™s too early to tell whether this is going to generate a result Iā€™m happy with or not. šŸ™‚

I was thinking about one of your opening comments before:

I just canā€™t figure out where to go next. I havenā€™t quite landed on an idea I can get excited about.

As kind of weird as it is for me to feel this way, Iā€™ve been having random ideas lately that might be a good fit for where you are, depending on if you feel you are done with the entire world or not.

I have found myself daydreaming about doing short stories involving some of the secondary characters and the lives they had/have before they got swept up in the events of my story, or a slightly different idea would be to do short stories that may involve new characters but showcase a particular culture from the world, or an interesting situation to be solved in an interesting way with magic, or etc. For me, I feel like thatā€™s a fairly foolish daydream for the point where I am at this time. But for you, with all that body of work, and looking for something to do - maybe a good fit?

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A sci-fi/fantasy blend is less complicated than it seems, if it is something you want to give a try in future.

My worry there is that Iā€™m not sure I can learn what I need to in order to write credible sci-fi while also learning to write. But Iā€™ve been a majority-fantasy reader for my entire life, from a very early age. I feel like Iā€™ve got a built in comfort zone on the fantasy side that is allowing me to focus more on learning to write than learning to write fantasy.

additional edits for minor corrections and clarity

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No dragons, no Tolkien-esque races, but a typical Europe-ish setting, say 18th-ish century without gunpowder, and a fairly hard magic system which is both powerful and self-limiting, with a story of pursuing justice while being pursued by those who would deny it. The theme has ended up being very heavy on friendship and loyalty. Itā€™s not a cozy, but itā€™s very much not grimdark, either.

This sounds really cool, actually! I think the ā€œmedievalā€ fantasy has been such a staple for so long that an 18th century vibe is quite refreshing. And nothing wrong with heading for the middle ground between cosy and grimdark.

Iā€™m not sure how much youā€™d need to worry about threatening your characters with death. I kind of think the whole Game of Thrones ā€œanybody can die at any timeā€ thing is a bit overdone now, and it risks alienating readers too. Iā€™ve dropped a few series because once all my favourite characters had been brutally killed off, I just didnā€™t care enough about the handful still left alive that I was willing to keep paying for books, you know?

As kind of weird as it is for me to feel this way, Iā€™ve been having random ideas lately that might be a good fit for where you are, depending on if you feel you are done with the entire world or not.

Iā€™m definitely done with the world. Like, I love it, and I might go back to it one day, but after writing so much about it, Iā€™m really ready to try something new and different. Iā€™m feeling drawn to some xenofiction, maybe, I just havenā€™t hit on the idea that really makes me go ā€œyes, that one!ā€ yet. I actually find short stories really challenging, because I tend to write by going really deep into a single characterā€™s POV, so if I care enough about them to write about them, then I want to write a lot. Soā€¦ I just need to find that character+world combination that I feel attached to enough to spend time on, if you know what I mean?

My worry there is that Iā€™m not sure I can learn what I need to in order to write credible sci-fi while also learning to write. But Iā€™ve been a majority-fantasy reader for my entire life, from a very early age. I feel like Iā€™ve got a built in comfort zone on the fantasy side that is allowing me to focus more on learning to write than learning to write fantasy.

That makes sense, yeah! Working with a new genre is challenging, especially if itā€™s not one youā€™ve read a lot. But a sci-fi/fantasy blend is more forgiving in that respect than hard sci-fi, since the magical elements allows you to get away with fuzzier science.

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This sounds really cool, actually!

Aw thanks!

This sounds really cool, actually! I think the ā€œmedievalā€ fantasy has been such a staple for so long that an 18th century vibe is quite refreshing.

Thanks - though I must admit itā€™s a very loose triangulation just based on sort of the state I wanted technology and such to be. (except the gunpowder of course) I didnā€™t want to have to write about people eating from trenchers and such. Due to the lack of gunpowder Iā€™ve preserved certain weapons that otherwise would likely not be very prevalent with firearms around, but itā€™s not the kind of story where I go very deep in drawing attention to that, either.

And nothing wrong with heading for the middle ground between cosy and grimdarkā€¦Iā€™ve dropped a few series because once all my favourite characters had been brutally killed off, I just didnā€™t care enough about the handful still left alive that I was willing to keep paying for books, you know?

Thanks - I try not to get too inside my own head about those sorts of things, but from time to time I get an imaginary ā€œreaderā€ on my shoulder saying ā€œOh sure and somehow none of them died during all that?ā€ I appreciate your pointing out that not everyone will have that reaction though. The character I was considering killing off has probably got the broadest appeal of any of the main characters, so if I had, I might have walked right into the trap you mention. šŸ™‚

Iā€™m definitely done with the world. Like, I love it, and I might go back to it one day, but after writing so much about it, Iā€™m really ready to try something new and different.

Yeah that totally makes sense. Thatā€™s a lot of words (and who knows how many more you revised/trimmed out over the years) for a solitary pursuit, I could absolutely understand wanting to do something different.

Working with a new genre is challenging, especially if itā€™s not one youā€™ve read a lot.

Iā€™ve read a fair bit of sci-fi too, but not a quantity that I feel is really going to help me write it, if that makes sense.

But a sci-fi/fantasy blend is more forgiving in that respect than hard sci-fi, since the magical elements allows you to get away with fuzzier science.

Thatā€™s a great point, and something to consider.

Iā€™m feeling drawn to some xenofiction, maybe,

I had to google that I admit - that does sound very interesting. Now with your comment about short stories Iā€™m going, ā€œSo like a squirrel who witnesses some major historical event while going about his daily life, but has no idea of the significance it poses to humans?ā€ Would that be the sort of thing that would qualify? I have to admit THAT is a genre I have never read.

I just need to find that character+world combination that I feel attached to enough to spend time on, if you know what I mean?

I totally do - itā€™s funny how things just grab you. My story originates almost entirely from a dream I had that inspired the magic system I use. I didnā€™t even decide I was going to write a story for another year or more after that, but all during that time I kept thinking it would be a fun magic system to work with. When I decided I was ready to start writing, it was immediately what I thought of.

Well, if you decide to let folks read your work, I canā€™t promise Iā€™ll get through that many words in a timely fashion, but Iā€™d love to give it a shot.

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