Love it

You could do a bug calling in a breach in the background

Just the leg of a bile titan in the foreground to really emphasise how screwed this helldiver is

ah see the problem is you brought a slugger to a breaker fight.

Not holding the gun properly

The helldiver should be bravely standing over the remains of that vile creature, anything else is dissident propaganda.

If you or someone you know is making art of helldivers hiding, report to your democracy officer.

Other than that, nice work!