I joined Beehaw specifically hoping to get in on the ground floor of the growing writing community here, but I have to admit I havenā€™t had much to say.

So, for the other folks checking this community once a day or so to see whatā€™s being posted, ā€œHi!ā€

Iā€™m enthusiastically nearing the end of the first draft of my first novel, and pretty excited to jump into revisions once thatā€™s done.

I aspire to be traditionally published, though Iā€™ve heard how unlikely that is for a first novel over and over, so Iā€™m (primarily) viewing this first novel as a learning experience, and itā€™s very much been one of those.

Iā€™m interested to hear where others are at.

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The huge project was basically a big, sprawling sci-fi/fantasy adventure. Magic, aliens, transformation themes. I just started writing one day and kept going. The 1.3 million words was over five or six years, so itā€™s mostly just that I was sticking with one story rather than hopping between different projects. It was definitely a journey, and I really enjoyed working on it. Thereā€™s something really liberating about just writing whatever I want and not really worrying about writing for anybody but myself. But I just reached a point where I felt like I had nothing more to add to it.

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That does sound pretty awesome. Writing a blended sci-fi/fantasy story is on my list of things I want to do, but I donā€™t think Iā€™m ready for that yet.

The worldbuilding for something that size must have been immense, I feel like that must have been the most fun part in a way.

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A sci-fi/fantasy blend is less complicated than it seems, if it is something you want to give a try in future. Mine basically started out very Star Wars-esque, before it took on a life of its own and I played up the magical elements more. I find that I donā€™t enjoy world-building for its own sake, so I tend to incorporate it into a story as I write. The results end up pretty fluid, but disorganised, which is interesting.

What kind of thing do you write?

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Iā€™m writing what I think of as ā€œclassic fantasyā€ - though whether others would find that term applicable I do not know.

No dragons, no Tolkien-esque races, but a typical Europe-ish setting, say 18th-ish century without gunpowder, and a fairly hard magic system which is both powerful and self-limiting, with a story of pursuing justice while being pursued by those who would deny it. The theme has ended up being very heavy on friendship and loyalty. Itā€™s not a cozy, but itā€™s very much not grimdark, either.

Iā€™m a little bit worried that I donā€™t provide enough possibility of death to any of the main characters via the story as written, but Iā€™m so close to the end that Iā€™m not going to change anything unless I still feel this way during revision.

I find that I donā€™t enjoy world-building for its own sake, so I tend to incorporate it into a story as I write.

I do this as well, but I take somewhat copious notes regarding the significant details as I create them. Itā€™s too early to tell whether this is going to generate a result Iā€™m happy with or not. šŸ™‚

I was thinking about one of your opening comments before:

I just canā€™t figure out where to go next. I havenā€™t quite landed on an idea I can get excited about.

As kind of weird as it is for me to feel this way, Iā€™ve been having random ideas lately that might be a good fit for where you are, depending on if you feel you are done with the entire world or not.

I have found myself daydreaming about doing short stories involving some of the secondary characters and the lives they had/have before they got swept up in the events of my story, or a slightly different idea would be to do short stories that may involve new characters but showcase a particular culture from the world, or an interesting situation to be solved in an interesting way with magic, or etc. For me, I feel like thatā€™s a fairly foolish daydream for the point where I am at this time. But for you, with all that body of work, and looking for something to do - maybe a good fit?

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A sci-fi/fantasy blend is less complicated than it seems, if it is something you want to give a try in future.

My worry there is that Iā€™m not sure I can learn what I need to in order to write credible sci-fi while also learning to write. But Iā€™ve been a majority-fantasy reader for my entire life, from a very early age. I feel like Iā€™ve got a built in comfort zone on the fantasy side that is allowing me to focus more on learning to write than learning to write fantasy.

additional edits for minor corrections and clarity

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