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Not only is that headline’s grammar exceptional(ly bad), for a moment I thought the developer of Control was named Alan Wake. Like, how did they manage to butcher that so badly?

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That’s a perfectly normal headline composition.

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That doesn’t mean it’s good.

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Sure, but “good” is subjective. I had no confusion from the headline and like that it was direct and to the point.

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I can tell you weren’t on newspaper staff

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News headlines aren’t limited by space on physical paper anymore. If your headline is confusing because of traditions based on outdated limitations it’s not a good headline imo.

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Your opinion doesn’t outweigh decades of an entire industry

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4 points

No, it doesn’t say “Control developer Alan Wake …”

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If that’s what they meant, there would have been a comma after “Control developer” I believe.

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This is not the place for commas. This calls for a slash.

Alan Wake / Control developer agrees

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